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Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Creative Writing - Zoo visit

One day you decide to visit the zoo, you become lost and find yourself in a restricted area where you discover a strange animal that no one has ever seen before. Describe what it looks like.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mine would look like a a small ball with spikes and little wings i hope you thought my animal was a good one

Emily

Anonymous said...

Very Creative indeed, Emily! Well done. (Miss Strugnell)

Anonymous said...

Is your creature scary or friendly Emily? Sounds like a very unique creature! (Mrs Lewis)

Anonymous said...

Cool idea Emily.
Mine would be sort of like
Emily's animal but it would be blue like the sky,with a small tail,as well as a head with sparkles all over it
[white sparkles],it would also be realy kind, gentle, giving and would care for everybody when they might need a friend or when they feel sad and need some comfort
Mine would never give up. It would also be realy good at soccer because i love soccer and because it would heve tall legs with about two warts on each foot and would need to use wart remouver evry single day wich would not hurt him and he would like always having to use wart remouver all the time it would also spit like a lama.Its fav food would be mud mud mud mud mud mud mud mud and more mud.It would like any sport at all.



Sorry if i got any words wrong it was because it was alot of typing for me.



SIDONIE

Anonymous said...

Thanks Sidonie! What an interesting animal you have imagined! This creature sounds like something that would be great to play with at school during lunchtime, he could even find some mud to eat on the playground. I wonder are these warts contagious to other animals and people? In which case maybe he is better to stay at the zoo. ;-)
From Mrs Lewis

Anonymous said...

To mrs Lewis,
The warts are not contageous exept for their own kind.

Sidonie

Anonymous said...

I like all the crichers .My one whoude look like that but very
big hav 6 eyes and very nice.
It whod allso be yellow and fluffy
Anika

Anonymous said...

Hello Anika. I read your description and automatically thought of this little japanese cartoon character (called pickachu). I included a link to show you:

http://imgs.abduzeedo.com/files/tutorials/fluffy_tut/pikachu_1.png

It's just missing a few eyes and needs to be a bit more fluffy!

- Mrs Lewis

Anonymous said...

Thanks Ms lewis I ll check it out.
p.s me and sidonie made a blog
http koala animal savers koala blogspot.com
from . Anika

Anonymous said...

thank you for the link I think it looks like that to.
Anika

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